pat

actual clown

deadlock griefer

hello!

thank you

hey dude! nix mix for your skill level

- your bassline around 0:50 seems to be kinda static and fighting with the kick and snare. i would sidechain (if you havent already) your bass to duck out of the way of main drums and to give your track more of a groove (assuming you understand what that this)
- kick and snare would be punchier if you had abetter mix
- love the background textures at elements you have going on throughout, they sound really good for a beginner
- i think the build at 2:38 could be more suspenseful to give the drop more impact. you can have a moment of silence before the drop, slowly automate out the lows or highs or both, have a longer riser, etc. youll understand when youre a little older

keep it up and eventually you might make a good song!