patrhetoric
Patrick   Sachsen-Anhalt, Germany
 
 
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patrhetoric 30 jan om 13:10 
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Emilgod 18 nov 2024 om 7:34 
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thedeadpianist 14 okt 2022 om 21:42 
hello! :steamhappy:
patrhetoric 1 aug 2022 om 7:35 
thank you
tech 31 jul 2022 om 10:37 
hey dude! nix mix for your skill level

- your bassline around 0:50 seems to be kinda static and fighting with the kick and snare. i would sidechain (if you havent already) your bass to duck out of the way of main drums and to give your track more of a groove (assuming you understand what that this)
- kick and snare would be punchier if you had abetter mix
- love the background textures at elements you have going on throughout, they sound really good for a beginner
- i think the build at 2:38 could be more suspenseful to give the drop more impact. you can have a moment of silence before the drop, slowly automate out the lows or highs or both, have a longer riser, etc. youll understand when youre a little older

keep it up and eventually you might make a good song!
the bottom 25 mei 2020 om 16:10 
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