patrhetoric
Patrick   Sachsen-Anhalt, Germany
 
 
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patrhetoric 30 Jan @ 1:10pm 
actual clown
Emilgod 18 Nov, 2024 @ 7:34am 
deadlock griefer
thedeadpianist 14 Oct, 2022 @ 9:42pm 
hello! :steamhappy:
patrhetoric 1 Aug, 2022 @ 7:35am 
thank you
tech 31 Jul, 2022 @ 10:37am 
hey dude! nix mix for your skill level

- your bassline around 0:50 seems to be kinda static and fighting with the kick and snare. i would sidechain (if you havent already) your bass to duck out of the way of main drums and to give your track more of a groove (assuming you understand what that this)
- kick and snare would be punchier if you had abetter mix
- love the background textures at elements you have going on throughout, they sound really good for a beginner
- i think the build at 2:38 could be more suspenseful to give the drop more impact. you can have a moment of silence before the drop, slowly automate out the lows or highs or both, have a longer riser, etc. youll understand when youre a little older

keep it up and eventually you might make a good song!
a 25 May, 2020 @ 4:10pm 
jeans gucci in the lamborghini