As the rubric suggests, this BASIC essay is overly simplistic in its analysis. Descriptors that come to mind while reading include: incomplete, oversimplified, meager, irrelevant, and insufficient. If you work at this level, you have not yet achieved mastery. You have achieved comprehension of the material, but you have not quite moved into higher level thinking skills, and your analysis is likely not as sufficiently developed as it needs to be. The language is simplistic and the insight is limited or lacking in development. You spend too much time focusing on "what" happens, but not enough time talking about "how" and "why" that shapes the protagonist, and what that means for the story. The biggest issue, however, is that it's never really clear which prompt you are responding to.

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