This is a VN that is poorly written. I played through one of the two stories here, and I don't know that I can bring myself to play through the other. I know this is free, but it's just not worth your time.

This VN falls victim to telling instead of showing - in that you're told that people become close and start caring about each other instead. But that's not how gamers work. You can't just tell me that my character has grown close to and cares about a character and expect me to feel the same. If anything, it leaves me feeling disconnected from the character I'm supposed to be playing as.

The writing sometimes makes no sense - more than once I read something and though, "WTF?" I thought maybe there was something lost in translation, but there's the (mediocre) English voice acting, so I'm not sure that this is a Japanese to English translation error.

The characters are unbelievable - the person yelling at you one moment is suddenly nice the next. The dialog is sometimes awkward. There's way too much time spent inside your character's head telling you (again telling rather than showing) how your character feels. The relationship progression / romance is unbelievable.

The art is okay, but at one point the text describes stuff that is not at all reflected in the background art meant to go along with the scene, which again just serves to pull you out of the story.

I hate to be negative about something free, but this just isn't worth your time. There are much better free VNs you could play instead.

This is a VN that is poorly written. I played through one of the two stories here, and I don't know that I can bring myself to play through the other. I know this is free, but it's just not worth your time. This VN falls victim to telling instead of showing - in that you're told that people become close and start caring about each other instead. But that's not how gamers work. You can't just tell me that my character has grown close to and cares about a character and expect me to feel the same. If anything, it leaves me feeling disconnected from the character I'm supposed to be playing as. The writing sometimes makes no sense - more than once I read something and though, "WTF?" I thought maybe there was something lost in translation, but there's the (mediocre) English voice acting, so I'm not sure that this is a Japanese to English translation error. The characters are unbelievable - the person yelling at you one moment is suddenly nice the next. The dialog is sometimes awkward. There's way too much time spent inside your character's head telling you (again telling rather than showing) how your character feels. The relationship progression / romance is unbelievable. The art is okay, but at one point the text describes stuff that is not at all reflected in the background art meant to go along with the scene, which again just serves to pull you out of the story. I hate to be negative about something free, but this just isn't worth your time. There are much better free VNs you could play instead.