Peace of Evil is essentially a demo for what could be a very promising visual novel if it was actually still in development. The first thing that really drew me into this demo was the unique and colorful art style for all the characters. I find bright colorful novels are soothing to my eyes which helps me to enjoy a read much more than others. I enjoyed the opening for this novel, the music was fun, and it did well to show off the character sprites.
What really caught my attention the most was the intro scene which highlighted how this novel was essentially the usual civilization after and apocalypse scenario, but it was told through the point of view from a new species other than humans, and through out the novel I personally think the writers did a great job building on that point of view. The plot line unfortunately does read like the imagination of a middle school kid, but even so it was at least consistent and well thought out I think. The story itself did a great job at keeping me engaged and excited for what was to come next in both the plot line and character interactions, especially as all the characters were well written from the view point of a species other than humans. While the story itself was well written, I was disappointed at the terrible proof reading that was done as grammar mistakes were all over the place. I did love the personalities of all the main cast, but the side characters were not thought through nearly as well. Many times there would just be random side characters pop up in the middle of dialogue with no introduction, and it confused the heck out of me because I had no clue what relation or purposed they served.
Overall as much as I like Peace of Evil I can not in good conscience recommend it to any one especially at its price. The novel is incomplete and I do believe it has been abandoned. So it is effectively a demo that has not been polished, and with no hope of ever being finished or expanded on.
Lia was best girl, such a sweetie pie, and I am severley saddened to not see more of her.